I pretty nervous now .. I am trying to write a short story … A complicated Love story …

I’m writing this story in form of diary entries written by characters … their point of view … ( Please don’t expect a much from me .. I’m still immature at writing )

So here we go.

MAX MARTINS

Like every other student, I was waiting eagerly for my 10th’s board result. My family was hoping me to get in the top 3 from my school, But I was waiting for that day for one more different reason too. I was waiting for that day in hope that I might see my first love… one-sided love Sanjana,
My Sanju.

She had transferred to my school this year, from the very first day her gorgeous had face started catching my eyes. She is not merely a beautiful doll, she also had scored more marks than me in most of the unit tests. she is so shy that I hardly have seen her talking with any boy. And the same shyness within me kept me away from the girls, though I was quite famous in my school, as I have won the student of the year award last year. But as I was not too social with others in school, there are only a few friends of mine, But none of them is too close to me to talk about one-sided love with.

So, this whole vacation period I tried to socialize with people as more as I can. I have started chatting online with many boys & girls from school I haven’t talked a single word in real life … just to overcome my shyness, But It hasn’t helped a lot, I guess.

Meanwhile, she had gone to Pune, her uncle’s place. that’s why I haven’t seen her after the exams have ended.

There is also a dark side of this event coming on, This might be the last time I will see her. I haven’t confessed my love to her, And after this result, we might go to different colleges. So, I think I should better forget her and move on…
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27 responses to “Secret Love …. 1”

  1. I know what you are talking about here 😀

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    1. Let me clear one thing .. It’s pure FICTION

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      1. Mahesh, this comment was amusing. Of course, when the fiction is this good, readers believe it is real.

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  2. This was an interesting writeup. well written, I love the first person narratives. 🙂

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    1. Thanks bro 😊 .. Even I love the first person narratives .

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  3. lovely…….diary entries…I love it

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  4. Hahaha, who reads a story backwards?? it’s me hahaha..I loved it and waiting for more from you..Great Write-up Mahesh!!

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    1. I have reading some stories backwards 😁😁
      Thanks for the kind words Dhwani ji 😇

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  5. Amazing write-up … Though I didn’t expect that ending but it was great 😄

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    1. It is not ending .. to be continued … many parts ( posts ) on way … just published next one .. take a look 😊

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      1. Oh okay … Will sure have a look !

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      2. Actually I have published 7 parts yet … but I had stopped writing this story … but I’m now considering to continue this story ( on public demand ) .. if you want to read all of them just simply google “awesomengers secret love” 😇

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      3. Oh I really didn’t about this , surely will google about it ! 😄

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      4. Ikr , many new followers don’t have any about this … that’s why I’m publishing those parts once again .. 😁

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      5. 👍🏻… Thanks for letting us know !

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  6. […] Day of result is coming and mom , dad are started calling me back to Goa as vacation is also about to end. So, I am traveling back to Goa , with butterflies in stomach about the result , though I am confident enough to say “I will be definitely in top 3 from the school”. to read previous part of SECRET LOVE click  here […]

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  7. Considering you are a first time writer, I would think this is quite a good start! All the best..keep writing 🙂 Cheers!

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    1. Hey Thanks … read other parts of this story … I hope you will like them .. 😊

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  8. you have written gd….dnt be nervous to write more now!!!

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    1. Thank you, Disha 🙂
      Well, I have already written 7 parts of this story… you can read those by visiting this link: https://awesomengers.wordpress.com/category/short-stories/secret-love/

      I hope you’ll like it!

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      1. yes i read them too!!! they r amazayn

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