There is a part of me that is fallen in the deep shadow of grief.
there is a part of me broken into pieces as a result of knowing your side.

There is a layer of me that widens out and falls down on me over and over again,

There is part of me asking the same question again and again,

whether you threw frustration of something else or you really intended to broke my heart.

I might change drastically as a result of all these happenings,

there might be a death of old me and a birth of new me,

But still, I am not mad at you,

still, there’s a part of me who will always pray for you.

Because there is a part of me who believe that it’s all my fault.

There is part of me that is lost in the mist of dreams,

There is part of me, trying to wake me up from this nightmares.

– Mahesh

There’s a part of me who have decided to stop writing poems. Awesomengers is now filled with just poems, so now onwards I am going to focus on writing articles and short stories.


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41 responses to “Part of me 💔”

  1. There’s a part of me… that really love ❤️ this poem…

    Good 😊 job.. so emotional .. and sentimental

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  2. So beautifully carved and the picture is so apt!

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  3. And I believe, there is a part of you that even you haven’t discovered yet, something better and more positive! 😃 I don’t know what but I believe whatever happened made you a more mature person, you will be fine very very soon! Stay strong and happy.

    -Firefly ☺☺

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    1. I’m going start searching that positive part. Thank you Chandni ..

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  4. Mcube????????
    What is all this?? Changing the things which were liked my everyone
    (*no winks this time😑)

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    1. The most valuable thing you spend on someone/something is your emotions and even after pouring all my emotions into these poems, there’s no value remaining in it if reader thinks my words are just words.

      Jadooo ! what’s all this ??? remember you asked me once what my posts are talking about ? you used to say that all these
      things are not meant for this stage !
      Now, I have got your point, bit lately though 😑

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      1. But I think your thoughts got absolutely conveyed the way you wanted to to the respective reader… Emotions also got understood!
        But yes even I do think the same though I too sometimes though but yes I remember my point of view and think that people must wait for the right stage & time to give place for such imp. thing which people take for granted in today’s world but I know a person like you (Mcube😉) will definitely understand. Hope you do!
        All we can do is keep on continuing with a big smile & hope😉😉😉😊😊

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      2. If continue writing poems they will like this one : kinda sad.
        so better way i should stop writing this negative stuff.

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      3. Negative… Don’t think so!
        Well… I can’t say much in this regard but you are definitely sounding sad! Is that true?

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      4. Okay, sorry. You won ! I will continue writing such poems 😉 Happy !??

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      5. Mcube😂😂😂😂😂
        I am winning since this😉😉😉😉😉and will continue!!
        La la la la la….😀😀😀😀
        😄😄

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      6. Okay now go read new poem 😁

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      7. First tell me what made you write this “Part of me💔”????

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      8. I don’t wanna reveal anything, I can’t tell , I won’t tell 😯

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      9. Mcube😒😒
        Okay this comment is open for all

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      10. Mcube😒😒😒 ??

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      11. You have chosen a new Emoji😉😉
        Now gotta go… Bye Mcube!

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      12. Okay. Bye. Take care 😇

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      13. It’s okay if you can’t😉
        I am happy you started again in the magical request of Ziddi Jadoo😇

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      14. Ya ya Ziddi/Busy/Invisible Jadooo 😏😛😛😂

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      15. Hehe! You know my Ist semester exams will begin from 25th nov. & tomorrow is my Tally Practical!

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      16. You know my semester exams are going on 😬
        Anyways best luck to me 😂😂😂
        Tumhe toh wishes ki koi zaroorat nahi, because you have that heavenly magical dust, right ? 😜😜 #joking
        All the best Jadooo 👍

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      17. Even then you are writing 😂😂😂 Mcube!!!😉😉😉All the best to you too!!
        And yes with these magical powers, I Do need real blessings😄😄

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      18. Nowadays, 5 minutes are sufficient for me to write a poem 😂😂😂
        All we need is some inspiration / emotions flowing in our mind to write something like this … and ALL THE BEST Jadoo 😉😉

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      19. That’s great!! Thank you very much😊😊😉😉😉

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      20. Done dona done done!!

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  5. Mahesh..there is a part of you which is made for doing something great..just never give up..nd never let yourself down

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    1. Thank you so much brother !

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      1. Aapka Swagat Hai Mahesh ji.

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  6. If you have to Beg someone to be in Your Life, then Bro, they don’t belong there.

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    1. Yeah I understand ! Thank you Cattie 😊

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