The Walls

Posted byMahesh MaliPosted inPoetryTags:, ,

The walls she have built

Will come tumbling down one day

And believe me,

It won’t be too bad

When she’ll see

That someone can finally look in

At who she really is,

And love her for that.

He will then build new wall around them,

So no one will be able to steal his life,

Entrapped within her.

– Mahesh

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Published by Mahesh Mali

Author of 'Reflections of My Youth' | Student @ SPPU | Former Fellow @BeingVolunteer | Freelancer @PlayoApp | Tennis Player

26 thoughts on “The Walls”

  4. This one’s relatable , don’t you think however just a question now that she’s within those walls and she’s comfortable with the fact that she’s going to be like that and maybe she’d always feel he might do something that might force her back to being confined in those 4 walls and this time in a much worse condition than before?
    Unless he’s absolutely magical of course
    Because I’m the – leave me in my shell don’t bother kind of person most of the time :p

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    1. Well this is not a complete poem as I have removed few starting lines. Because a friend of mine suggested to do so.

      ” She had her heart broken way too many times,
      So she build the walls around her heart.
      But, there is someone who would preserve and mend it, as now it’s attached to him.
      The walls she have built
      Will come tumbling down one day ”

      This the original draft I had written.
      I guess now you will get your answer.

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  5. I’m not heart broken even once so far , Mine is a different story
    But yeah for the walls to go down it must take her getting attached to someone but then if I tell you this as the case would be with me –
    It’d always be a question : whether or not letting him in was right
    Whether or not getting attached is right
    And every once in a she’d may be push him away or try to build the walls back

    You know the guy will have such s hard time he has to make her believe every now and then he won’t go ,he won’t break her heart, she can trust him and
    Hide brick and cement for that matter much easier .lol just kidding
    So yeah.
    But It’d be such a nice love story anyway.
    Because love isn’t supposed to be a easy , smooth road to travel. 🙂

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